I know this doc is preliminary, but I want to be helpful, so I thought I would send some notes on corrections. These are typos and whatnot. I have essentially ignored punctuation, style, and voicing - Gus is free to write whoever he wants and I think he does a great job. Here are a few items to look at:
- The page header (on all pages says) Guide to C# and .Net Micro Framework. Should probably be changed to the title of this book.
- Page 5: point 3, should be “… with almost no changes” instead of “[italic]on[/italic] changes”
-Page 7: the last sentence mixes “most of” and “than” in the sentence. You might want “more of your time … than you would …” or “most of your time… instead of on the hardware design” - Page 8: the first sentence should say “very advanced.”
- the last sentence should be “allows for advanced processor…”
- Page 11: 4th point mentions VS 2008 - do you want this to be VS 2010?
- Page 14: first sentence in 6.1, should be “Most programmers are used to seeing …”
- last paragraph, an “a” is missing in “had it available a long time”
- Page 18: it says “Do not to add your own name” Is this what you intended? If so, the “to” needs to be removed. If not, maybe a word is missing.
- “install” is misspelled in “You need to install” under Loading Software.
- Page 22: second paragraph should be “This port is also available in other form[italic]s[/italic]…”
- under the graphic, “one of the supported compiler[italic]s[/italic]”
- Page 24: “You will find 3 folders, bin, lib, and obj.”
- “The [italic]one [/italic]we are most…”
- Page 25: near the end of the second paragraph, “All these files make up” files should be plural and in this case, “make up” is two words.
- Page 31: first sentence, “and that [italic]is [/italic]what”
- “in [italic]the [/italic]source [italic]code [/italic]to GHI’s VID”
- “port source code to use…”
- Page 32: Second sentence, “… firmware [italic]for [/italic]now.”
- Page 33: sentence just above the graphic - perhaps it should be “You may have some warning messages at the end, but you just need to make sure that we have no errors.”
- Page 35: “The firmware also ships with superior…”
- Page 37: first sentence, “configure the tool as [italic]shown[/italic]…”
- 2nd sentence below the graphic, “Once loading [italic]is[/italic]…”
- Page 38: “perfect for cloning a [italic]solution[/italic]”
- Page 47: start of last paragraph, “The book [italic]reflects[/italic]…”
Thanks for all of the great stuff! I had been looking at other NetMF platform, but you have by far convinced me that GHI is the way to go.
